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二、意義闡釋:全文主體第二段(4)

我的滿分考研寫作書 作者:王江濤


小波妞:那2009年呢?

道長:2009年的人物是很多年輕人:These teenagers symbolize a large number of young people(這些青少年象征著很多年輕人);事物是蜘蛛網(wǎng):The spider web epitomizes the Internet(這張蜘蛛網(wǎng)是互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的縮影);動作是這些人被蜘蛛網(wǎng)分開:The fact that these young people are separated by the spider web suggests that a lot of people are reluctant to approach others(這些年輕人被蜘蛛網(wǎng)分開這個事實證明了很多人不愿意與他人接近).

小波妞:2010年真題怎么寫?。繘]有人物啊。

道長:可以先寫三個主要事物啊,第一個事物是一只火鍋:The hot pot represents cultural integration(這只火鍋代表了文化融合);第?個事物是火鍋里的東西:Confucianism, Buddhism, Taoism, the Enlightenment, humanism and post-modernism are naturally associated with multi-cultural ingredients(儒、佛、道、啟蒙、人本、后現(xiàn)代自然與多元文化元素聯(lián)系起來);最后翻譯文字說明:The fact that the cultural hot pot is both delicious and nutritious indicates that cultural blending should be encouraged and maintained(這只文化火鍋既美味又營養(yǎng)這個事實證明了我們應(yīng)該鼓勵和保持文化融合).

小波妞:聯(lián)系現(xiàn)實這種寫法太好用了,不需要太多構(gòu)思。那?四種論證手段呢?

道長:正反論證。2000、2009年的大作文全國第一就使用了這種寫法。例如2009年的文字說明是“網(wǎng)絡(luò)的近與遠”,必須使用正反論證,網(wǎng)絡(luò)的優(yōu)缺點缺一不可。當(dāng)年全國第一的第二段是這樣寫的:From the cartoon, we can conclude that the cartoonist wants to convey such a message: with the popularity of computers, people from all over the world become nearer by using the Internet to communicate with each other. Meanwhile, people also become far away from their friends. All of us accept the fact that the development of the Internet brings lots of conveniences to our daily life, for instance, we can buy a book on the net instead of going to a bookstore. Besides, we can communicate with our friends on the net without going out of home. But we can’t ignore the other side of these: the time we spend with friends or family becomes less. And we hardly see them once in a week. It will make us feel lonely if we continue to use the tool on the net to talk with friends instead of talking with them on the phone or going out with them.這里面既有正反論證,也有舉例論證,使用了兩大論證手段。

小波妞:第二段中間的論證部分清楚了,那第二段最后一個部分寫什么呢?

道長:小結(jié)啊,概括論證、總結(jié)本段,與第二段主題句前后呼應(yīng)。例如2007年全國第一第二段的小結(jié)是這樣寫的:So, with confidence and the right assessment of difficulties, try and exert your strength, and then you will overcome all problems(因此,擁有信心和對困難的正確估計,并且竭盡全力,我們就將解決所有的問題).第二段也是總分總結(jié)構(gòu),如果不?小結(jié)就是總分結(jié)構(gòu)。


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